Pitch Feedback and Reflections

In my pitch i think i spoke clearly and the audience could understand all of the key points. all of my key points were covered and explained to the best of my ability. I also think i explained the synopsis of my advertisement well and gave a clear idea of what my advert would be like. If i could do it again i would have spoken louder to the audience and although i did keep eye contact with the audience for some of my pitch i was still looking at my Que cards which made me look unprepared and looked like i didn't know what to say next however this is not the case i think it was just down to nerves. All round the class feed back was good, they mostly said the information on my presentation was good and was explained well. they also said that i was not loud enough when presenting and although they understood the points i was getting across they could barely hear me.

I got my final feedback from my teacher with things i did well and things i can improve. The things i did well were i had a detailed presentation and also introduced the BCAP code well and impressed my teacher by making all the changes to my presentation that was originally given. My idea for a re branding was good and would work as a real Advert. The target audience was also well done. I was also well prepared and spoke clearly. Lastly i knew my idea very well and gave me confidence. What i can improve on is the volume of my voice as it was quiet i also read from the Que cards most of the time rather than using Ques. Lastly nerves got to me a little bit making me ''umm''  throughout the presentation.